“ Poem For A Lady Whose Voice I Like” Fanfic
The door knocks come in he says, sit down I’ve got some exciting news a new role came up and the director asked for you directly! She perked up with excitement and says “oh yea what is it ? “ He begins to explain the role of how she would be a heroic women who fights villains. It was all sounding marvelous until he showed her the sketch up of the character. This halted her excitement she was tired of playing roles that were overly sexualized and required her to show so much skin, She thought for a change this was actually going to be a story about a strong bad ass woman. “I don’t want to do this role !” she said , he replied “ NO No no you don’t understand this movie has great revenue possibilities its a shoe in to be a hit it already has such an intense following, you can’t turn this down this is a career solidifying kind of role. “I want to do roles that are more complex and dynamic, a role that will allow me to show my talent, something meaningful” she said. He began to get upset not being able to wrap his mind around her not wanting the part
so he said “You ain’t got no talent, if you didn’t have a face you wouldn’t be nobody”
and she said “god created heaven and earth and all thats black within them”
so he said “You ain’t really no hot shit they tell me plenty sisters take care better business than you”
What does my story feel like its missing ?
Should I give him more of a back story ?